Monday, December 19, 2005

Heh

He awakens by the sound of the prayer as it fills the steady silence, climbs out of bed and heads to the bathroom. He slowly opens the faucet and the cold water trickles down. He gets ready to cup the water with his hands, but turns his head to the left towards the window. The glaring light of the car blinds his eye for a second, but he was used to it. He could hear clinking of keys, showing a struggle of opening the door. He hears heels clicking for a second and then what it seemed like a noise of them being dropped on the ground. He could hear shuffling of quiet tip toes, a stealth manoeuver he quickly became familiar with. He looked back at the basin and noticed his hands were overflowing with water. The water he was carrying splattered all over the basin as he quickly withdrew his hands from each other. He gripped the sides of the basin with all his pressure, but his anger resided instantly. At least she came before I finished praying he thought.

7 Comments:

Blogger Temetwir said...

is she his daughter?

7:56 AM  
Blogger Q8Prodigy said...

She's his wife.

1:07 PM  
Blogger Temetwir said...

aha in that case he has a LOT of explanation to do .. what could ever let him "get used to it"

3:23 PM  
Blogger Q8Prodigy said...

You'll find out in due time, plus it will get controversial.
It has to do with the two posts about the mystery woman.

6:41 PM  
Blogger MSB said...

oooh i like mystery.. ok then my guess it's the girl's (from the plane) sister.. she stays w/her mom all night taking care of her and returns home in the morning to her husband! that's what i want to believe for now! :)

12:17 AM  
Blogger Q8Prodigy said...

MSB- Is it that obvious? But her intentions are not that pure. :P

12:40 AM  
Blogger MSB said...

told u i love mystery!! :)

3ad what her intentions are, good or bad, that's up to the author (you!) :) so u can make it as pure or as evil as u want.. i'll wait to find out.. and the best thing about a live story is that the events can easily change as u write it... will be waiting.

6:28 PM  

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